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Having Cried Wolf
by Gretchen Shirm
Affirm Press
2010
First
Collection Awards: shortlisted, Award for New Writing in NSW Premier's Literary Awards
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"It’s
funny the way the good things in life, when they come, always
seem to come together, in a hurry, like soldier crabs marching across
the sand while the tide is out. And then they retreat just as fast."
Reviewed by Annie Clarkson
This
collection of stories inhabits the beaches and cul-de-sacs of a
fictional Australian town, Kinsale, where two friends Grace and Alice
grew up, drifted apart and then are drawn back together.
It is not quite a "novel in short
stories", more a cycle of interconnected stories that starts and
ends with these two friends, with stories in between that give brief
glimpses into the lives of friends, family, neighbours and strangers
who have a link to this backwater town. There is no over-arching
narrative thread between stories. Each story is distinct and stands
alone. But we revisit certain characters and tragic events cross over
into the lives of others. This is achieved in a natural way, not
always obvious, particularly at the beginning of stories, and allows
us to slowly piece together a picture of life in Kinsale, with its
slow tides, sudden storms and every day tragedies.
Grace’s husband is a soldier, who
is sent to war. Alice is separating from her husband.
They seem to be the main characters in the collection, yet they are
not in most of the stories. We also meet Tracee, a counselor who
covers up for her son when he has an accident. Lizzie takes her
cousin Mandy for a swim at the waterhole. Chris goes to see a
counselor with his wife, and finds it hard to confront a difficult
truth.
There are many tragedies occurring
in these pages, particularly bereavement, loss and separation, all
experienced in different ways. Most of the time, loss is explored
from a distance, by an observer, a passerby, a friend or family
member who is witnessing or affected by someone else’s struggle.
Sometimes the tragedy has just happened, other times the story
explores the aftermath, weeks or years later.
The power, perhaps, in this
collection, is that tragedy is approached in very ordinary ways,
through the scraping of
knives against plates as two people eat dinner in the dark, or
someone fiddling with the microwave. People drive home, or go
shopping, or tidy the house. Mostly, people are getting on with the
everyday business of life, quite often associated with eating, or as
it is described in one story, ‘the silent ritual of dinner’. By
focusing on the ordinary details of people’s lives, the struggles,
difficulties, pains, or sorrows, are illuminated.
The emotions are more visible in the
tides, rains, shifts of light that are closely observed throughout
the collection. As though the town feels the pains as much as people
do, or by observing the changes in landscape, such as a beached
fishing boat, the repressed or hidden emotions are drawn to the
surface.
Mostly, this is skillfully done,
with attention being paid to the smallest of details bringing the
landscape, emotion and experience so closely aligned that much can be
left unsaid.
These stories are not wrapped up
tightly at the end. This writer has a light touch, not dwelling
or leaving us with difficult or dark emotions, but instead giving us
a sense of life moving on. The stories shift around in time, people
leave Kinsale and come back, the tides keep changing. This gives an
optimistic feel to the collection. The only drawback is this may
imply a simplicity which is often not the case in these kinds of
loss.
But, overall, this is a strong
collection of stories. There is a real pleasure in the writing: the
precise language; the sensory details, particularly of the sea; the
subtle power in how the writer approaches the everyday struggles of a
community who are isolated and connected in their experiences and
grief.
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Annie Clarkson is
a poet and short story writer living in Manchester, UK. Her chapbook
of prose poems Winter
Hands was published by
Shadow Train Books in 2007. Her short fiction has been published in
various anthologies, magazines and online, including Brace
(Comma), Unsaid Undone
and This Road We’re On
(Flax Books), Transmission,
Ouroboros Review, Succour, Mslexia, Dreamcatcher, Cake,
and Pank magazine.
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